1. Love At Last
I remember the good times
that we once had...
but still my life
is oh...so sad
Mother and daughter relationships are complex because the daughter looks to her mother as a role model of what a woman is. As she grows up and sees other women who live their lives differently, she chooses between imitating her mother or other significant influences in her life. As an adolescent she may come to look down on her mother and think that other woman are much better. Of course she is not a fully grown woman so she does not understand the challenges and choices that her mother faces. It is only when she herself becomes a woman that she can fully appreciate her mother.
I remember the good times
that we once had...
but still my life
is oh...so sad
I was so surprised someone endured a mother's pain such as I experienced. My husband was a philanderer and also left me alone a lot in Winnipeg. The children and I coped, but it was lonely. A...
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Mommy Dearest you will always be
My mother so loving and so loved by me
For God has taken you to be by his side
Now in Heaven is where you will reside
I love this poem, I was looking for a poem to place on my Facebook page in remembrance of my Mom on mother's day and what would have been her upcoming birthday
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Because you are my mom, you loved me before I was ever seen.
You thanked God for this miracle, this little human being.
So exciting, yet fragile it all must have seemed to you then.
Hearing my little heart beat inside you, now life begins.
Sarah,
Please know that ten years ago I had read your message and was touched by what you said. I never got around to replying, and for that I apologize. I hope this still reaches you so...
When times seem too hard to bear and I feel like giving up,
I envision your beautiful face, the twinkle of your eyes and things of such.
The bond we created from my womb to the day you were born
Is a mother and daughter bond that can never be torn.
This story is beautiful, Sorry for your loss of your husband and the blessing of a baby girl who made it through for you.
Mommy, do you love me?
Of course I do, dear!
Let's snuggle a minute,
Come sit
Same scenario between my daughter and I ten years ago when she was 15. It broke our hearts, but we let go and let God. Didn't hear from her for almost 3 years. Then a mutual family friend...
My father gave her to me, as a gift from God above,
Who would know a step-mother,
is someone you can really love?
I shall call her mother,
I am a new step mom (I hate that word) to a 15 month babygirl. She was conceived when my fiance and I took a break. I forgave him and was so excited about the new baby. The mother was young...
Sometimes I know the words to say to give thanks for all you've done,
but then they fly up and away as quickly as they come.
How could I possibly thank you enough, the one who makes me whole,
That was such a beautiful poem. Mothers truly are a blessing. Many of the feelings expressed here are so relatable . They do so much for us that "thank you" is just not enough but we can show...
I can never explain the ways I've felt
Growing up without you, playing the cards I was dealt.
There were always many things I wanted to say
My dreams and new thoughts that came each day
I have a daughter that does this to me. I'll be 50 on the 13th and I'm tired and empty. I love my daughter.
I'm so sad deeply, beyond depressed.
You are my hero.
The most influential person in my life.
You are loved by us all.
A mother, sister, daughter, and a wife.
My mother and I are the best of friends. We confide in each other, and we talk about everything. We tell each other how much we love each other every single day.
You brushed my hair and tucked me in,
Made me laugh for hours on end.
You kissed my boo-boos when I fooled around.
Mommy, you never let me down.
This is a touching poem from a daughter to mother showing all the little things to the big things that matter in life between a mother and daughter. I love this poem. It's so sentimental!...
My darling daughter,
I just want you to know
wherever your life takes you,
my heart shall also go.
My beautiful daughter is getting married today, and I must share her now with the man she has chosen. This poem just says it all for me it is lovely, and so heartfelt I am going to share it...
When I held you for the first time,
My life began to shine.
I knew then this life wasn't just mine.
I'm so glad to hear that one of my poems has touched others. My little girl is now almost 14 and we have face many challenges but she continues to be my little girl.
Thank you all for...
If you don't know
How much you mean
Not just to the world
But also to me
My mom is the happiness of my life. I never laugh as much with other as I do with her. Can never have fun without her. I can never repay her sacrifices. The only thing I can do is to make her...
A tidal wave of emotions,
have sent my soul out to sea.
Crashing currents submersing,
what once was you and me.
Dear Tersia, your story has touched me deeply. I am so very sorry for the loss of your beautiful daughter. I couldn't even begin to imagine the grief and sadness you must be feeling. I have 3...
I received a gift on that faithful day
Of which I know I could never repay,
Just as God came down to say
He just gave one of his Angels away.
I am too a pampered daughter and I loved reading your poem, it touched my heart. Thanks for sharing
Our life has not been easy.
We've managed to drift apart.
But whatever it's worth,
I have faced the same problems, and at times losing hope and waking up to a wet pillow full of tears. I love this poem because it gives me hope for another relationship with my mother. Thank you.
Analysis of Form and Technique
The one who brought me down to earth
And held me every day.
The one who gracefully gave me birth
And said, I love you in every way.
Very good usage of words. Rhyming pattern is good and the structure rocks. One of the best I've read so far. Keep on writing more!
She's always been there for me.
Just talking to her can make me happy.
She tells me of the hard times she's been through
In hopes that I won't go through them too.
I'm using this in my mom's christmas gift, I know she'll love it.
If it wasn't for my mom I never would have made it in my life. I have always been a daddy's girl and wrote this to let my mom know how I really appreciate and love her even if it seemed I didn't.
My Mother gave me my talents and traits.
My Mam taught me to embrace them.
My Mother gave me my fears and doubts.
This story touched my heart deeply. As an adoptee, I relate to this greatly. Thank you so much.