I Have Found The One
in Falling in Love Poems
I set forth the hand upon you
Holding tight to all that's near
Alerting my heart to tremors
in Falling in Love Poems
I set forth the hand upon you
Holding tight to all that's near
Alerting my heart to tremors
in Change Poems
I ask but this one small thing.
Give me the worldly skies
For I cannot stay trapped here
A little bird am I....
This poem touched me in a way I didn't know poetry could. I'm an aspiring writer myself and often use bird metaphors in a sort of way that my friends think is pretentious - but to see someone...
in Fear Poems
Fear is the strangest thing,
as it comes from within our heads.
But that don't stop it tucking us in
when we're safe within our beds.
It is not your conversation
That keeps me entertained
But rather the way you look at me
That makes me feel sustained
I am not a poet or even remotely related to poetry. I just want to write a poem for my girlfriend and surprise her on her birthday and I came here to understand how it works. I wanted to...
Thanks for your comment. It's always nice to hear support and appreciation.
My Goodness! I would be honoured to have 'silence is golden' used at your Wedding :) I'd also be happy to write you something more personalised. I have an account on fiverr, (but for a comment such as yours i'd be happy to do anything free of charge ;) ).
I also have a lot more poemes on my site : poetry-by-hanna.com and have recently started a youtube channel by the same name. I think you would enjoy looking through them.
Let me know if you tie the knot!
Hanna
I'm sorry this is such a late reply. Being in China, I tend to get emails, notifications, etc. after the fact! Thank you for your comment. The poem "A little Bird am I" hasn't gained much momentum, both on this site and on my own. I'm very grateful to hear your words and to know it has reached even one person. Please, find my other poems through the like on my profile on this site, I would appreciate any comments/support anyone has to offer.
Thanks again,
Hanna
Hi! This is a remarkable poem. I love the way you used the words. I just have to add though, that it saddens me that poetry about care is always reminding people/caregivers/nurses to be nicer. I worked in care for 8 years before moving to China. It is sad to say that some people do need this sort of reminding but the caring caregivers never get mentioned. Out of all the caregivers I've worked with (and I've worked with many) only a handful could have done with reading this poem and others like it. There's also soo much love in care homes and caregivers really do care regardless of the simple few who give this profession such a bad name. Just my thoughts.
Hanna
Thank you. I am currently working on a website to promote my poetry. I hope you will check it out once it's up and running.