21. Say Yes
Say yes, and we could surf the highest waves,
Your hand in mine, never losing faith.
We could climb Mt. Everest, and as we gasp for air,
You'll say you love me,
Say yes, and we could surf the highest waves,
Your hand in mine, never losing faith.
We could climb Mt. Everest, and as we gasp for air,
You'll say you love me,
Yes, yes, more yes. I'm ready for the adventure of what lies ahead. I'm not scared or shy. I believe anything is possible as long as you're willing to try. No matter what the future holds, I...
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It's no joke,
what I say to you.
Every word that falls from lips
is absolutely true.
Oh my gosh! What a beautiful poem. I'm currently going through something like this, and it really sucks. It hurts so bad, and just thank you, because this captures exactly what I feel.
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Calm the winds as angels sing.
Lovers' tune and flowers bring
little buds caressed by dew
sending pretty thoughts of you.
Many things can make me happy, many things can make me smile,
many things can make life wonderful, make it all seem so worthwhile.
But nothing makes me happier than the special friend I've found.
Life couldn't feel more wonderful whenever you're around.
I'm not scared to love you.
I'm okay when you're around.
You've given my heart a soundtrack.
I happen to like the sound.
You have a good poem here. It's very important that you use your feelings to help you choose the words. You want people to feel what you where feeling when they are reading the poem.
I fell in love with her smile;
It's what makes mine.
She brings chills to my eyes;
I love this girl so dearly, but I don't think she will ever be mine. It is so hard to accept that she is with someone else and move on, but whatever happens, I will always love her.
I see her every day,
But today, there is something special about her,
Something I haven't seen before.
The glow on her face,
You got me hooked, I couldn't stop reading and as I read on I could picture her and you laughing smiling, crying, glancing at each other, etc. Isn't imagery a beautiful thing :)
Nice poem,...
Five months have passed,
How far have we come?
I really don't know,
What am I to become?
Thank you very much, Amanda, for such an amazing poem. Sent this poem to my girlfriend on her birthday, and she really liked it. This was phenomenal. Thank you!!
Analysis of Form and Technique
Every day that passes us by
all I could think of is this one guy.
I never thought I'd feel this way,
but the feeling I have I want to stay.
There is this lady I first loved in my life. I don't know how to let her know I wish she could be the mother of my unborn children. I managed to tell her about a month ago; she said we should...
I'm dreaming of you all day,
I'm thinking of you all night.
I wish I could meet you,
I wish I could tell you
Love is an amazing thing. You can fall in love with anyone. Love is an amazing feeling. It feels like there are millions of butterflies.
When our eyes met
for the very first time,
I knew it was you
to clear my pastime.
After reading this poem I printed it out and I gave it to my husband, I even added some of my own word and OMG!!... he totally loved it!!...
Thanks to that person who wrote this, waiting for...
I followed my heart,
And it led me to you.
I knew from the start
That this feeling was new.
It made me think of how long me and my boyfriend have been together and I wouldn't know what to do if he ever walked out. I guess my mind would just go blank he's just the love of my life and...
As I lay here in the dark by your side,
You bring me great love, and I feel great pride.
For you, my darling, are my number one.
She is unique.
Every time I see her
I just can't seem to know how to speak.
Everything around her is a total blur.
The sunshine appears to be brighter.
My heart feels a bit lighter.
More beautiful are the flowers appearing.
Every time we're together,
I feel complete.
You show me love.
Falling for you.
Why did you do this?
You did this to me.
You stole my heart,
can't you see?
This story touched my heart! It's an amazing poem and is true for me in many ways. I hope it touches other people's heart like it did mine. There is too much to say about this poem, that I...
Like a fuzzy new kitten you light up my day,
I've always wondered how you could make me feel this way,
Like an Eskimo kiss on a sun burnt nose,
It makes me wiggle my feet and curl my toes,
take me
to the center of your soul
show me where you hide
lead me to the forgotten wounds
Overwhelming and revealing
this amazing feeling,
this ache I crave, this desire,
this emotion you inspire.