He Stole Me
in Fear Poems
At first his knocks were timid
but his intentions were depraved.
I felt my darkest fears arising
as he grew more angry and half-crazed.
in Fear Poems
At first his knocks were timid
but his intentions were depraved.
I felt my darkest fears arising
as he grew more angry and half-crazed.
in Summer Poems
As the sun starts to fade into twilight
and a peacefulness settles in,
even nature grows lazy and sleepy
as the hum of the crickets begin.
I can see it, feel it and hear it - you have created such a vivid picture. Thank you, Patricia, for yet another beautiful poem. Love and very best wishes, Ann.
in Aging Poems
You may not know how old she is
But I'm quite sure you'll recognize.
It doesn't take a rocket scientist
To see the ravages of time.
Oh Pat, I just love your poetry. I am so damned old myself it's great to read a poem that sums up how I feel about my aged self. Keep writing! Love and very best wishes, Ann.
I'm slipping back into that hole
And my hopes are wearing thin.
I try to take a different path
Still, I hear it beckoning.
Another great poem. I've had depression, but not quite as bad. However, it's great that you can write about it, as I'm sure it will connect with many people who know exactly what you are...
The sun rose in her radiance
Above fields of green and gold.
She embraced Him with her subtle warmth
As in the morning glow, He strolled.
Ebony,
I just randomly found your page and read every poem because each one was so extraordinarily good. We have almost the exact same style of writing, and I like that you write about different topics. You are an exceptionally good poet! -Pat Fleming
Dear Meryl,
Your words are beyond sweet. Knowing that my poems can mean that much to someone is just so heart warming and uplifting for me. I love the fact that we live so far from each other but we can share feelings that are so similar and make that connection. Thank you for taking the time to pay such a wonderful tribute to my words. It means far more than you know to me.
Pat F
Lisa,
I love this poem. I'm a big fan of rhyming poetry and your rhyme is spot on. I love the message and the easy, simple way that you convey it here. I bet someone could make a great song out of your words. They really lend themselves to music. Beautiful work. -Pat
Jacob,
I happened to read your poem and it was so weird because I wrote about the very same subject, Soulmates, just a few months ago. I honestly had not seen your poem until today. But I must tell you, your poem is so beautiful and much, much better than mine. I always say that writing poetry is a hobby for me. You represent what a true, heart and soul poet is capable of creating. This is just lovely! -Pat
Dear Lillian,
I am troubled by how many people have responded to this poem by describing how badly they feel. I have been depressed my whole life and tried many methods to feel better and while some have worked for a time, ultimately I'd fall again. But now that I'm older, I've realized that my knowing what pain really is made me a much more compassionate person. I worked as a social worker with the mentally ill and while I could often identify with a patient's feelings of sadness and be able to help them, other members of the Team had no clue and little sympathy. I believe in God and thought maybe I could help more than others. I was a social worker for 36 years and loved it. I believe maybe this life may never suit people like us but maybe it's because we are here to help other people which makes us very special. Know how special you are and reach out to others. Let them know you understand and it's not their fault, so many need that. You are a such a gift in God's eyes.