Together

• by Lilly
• 8 years ago

Zoe! You are amazing! I'm only 11 myself, but my brother is your age and all he wants to ever do is play video games! So you're definitely using your life for the better! I'm sure you'd be an inspiration to all young writers! I'm going to share your story and your poem with my writing teacher. I loved writing all my life and I hope you grow up to be an outstanding poet or writer some day. You can start now. You can make a weekly poem "newspaper" and make copies of it to pass around at school! It would be great practice! I've done this digitally myself but I'm just good with that kind of stuff this way your friends can see your poems!

• by Baruch Israel
• 10 years ago

Hi Zoe
I started writing poems about the same age as you
Today I teach English to children around your age and I am going to use your poem in my class!
I love your poem! keep on developing your talent!
Baruch

• by Ana
• 10 years ago

I'm same age as you. I really love your poem.

• by Faye Anne, Southend
• 13 years ago

Zoe,
for a girl of your age and mentality your words are fluent and impressing.

Good luck with your future poetry x

Jango x

• by Manuel
• 14 years ago

Hi Zoe,
I just wanted to drop in and tell you how wonderful your TOGETHER poem is. I thought it said so much in just a few short words.

I hope to be able to read more of your future writings sometime soon. I also have a daughter named Zoe who is actually your same age. I even have a son named Makya too. I miss and love them so much. :(

Again, fantastic job writing this poem. Best of luck to you with your future poetry.

• by Brittany
• 15 years ago

Zoe, I must say for you to be only 9 your words are touching, warming. It has reminded of my past and my future reading your poem