Sunny's Wish For Mom
The sun rose in her radiance
Above fields of green and gold.
She embraced Him with her subtle warmth
As in the morning glow, He strolled.
The sun rose in her radiance
Above fields of green and gold.
She embraced Him with her subtle warmth
As in the morning glow, He strolled.
in Aging Poems
I wake up each day
On this journey of mine,
Grabbing each moment
Of my limited time.
Miss Fleming: I was looking at a poem I wrote, SWEET THINGS FOR YOUR EAR, and I saw you left me a wonderful review. We seem to have the same outlook on life. I look back on my life a lot. I...
in Aging Poems
It could not be me he's thinking of
When he looks up at the soft moonlight.
And it can't be me that he's dreaming of
When he falls asleep at night.
Another brilliant poem - I love the way you write - keep them coming, please.
Very best wishes, Ann
in Snow Poems
We awakened to the whitest light
Seeping through the blinds.
We leapt from bed and to the windows
To take a probing peek outside.
Your poem is so beautifully written and contains such vivid images! It takes me right back to my childhood. I can almost feel the ice crystals hitting my face!
Best wishes,
Virginia
I watch the hands on the clock tick by
And I wonder where time goes.
Will this be the year to end all years?
Well, only God can know.
Excellent poem, as always. Keep writing...
Very best wishes,
Ann
My Dear Malainse,
I am sobbing right now! Your words have both broke and filled my heart. Let me share with you, you have touched my life so much and lifted my spirits clear to the sky. I too suffer from depression and have been on a downward slide lately. I have been feeling so insignificant in this life. I felt like there was no reason for me to be here. Then you wrote me this message and suddenly you changed everything for me. I am so honored that my words could help you so much. You have given me such a gift and I wouldn't have received that much needed gift from you and your nephew would not have gotten the help he needed and wanted from YOU, if you had left us. Please, don't give up. Know that you made a difference in my life today and I have a feeling you are far more important than you realize. Please, stay with us, take each day by itself, it's OK to cry it out but always give yourself one more night, then one more day and the miracles will start appearing. Sincerely, Pat F.
Dear Elizabeth,
Growing up in New Jersey, I have always had easy access to the ocean. I love the ocean but, I have always been interested in the beauty of the PACNW. I love to look at films that take place there and pictures of that area. I am truly honored and thrilled that your daughter has chosen my poem about the ocean to recite at her School Festival next month. Please tell her how much it means to me to have her pay such a wonderful tribute to my words. I wish I could be there. Please tell her good luck from me and thank you so very much again.
Sincerely,
Pat F.
Dear Danielle,
Your words are so kind, and I want to sincerely thank you, not only for taking the time to read my poem, but to also write such a beautiful critique of it. I am immensely pleased that you could relate strongly to my words. I have struggled with depression my entire life, and it has indeed affected the quality of my life. I am so very, very sorry that you have endured this pain as well. Just don't ever give up because the depth of your pain is what makes you a special person. You will be a more compassionate, understanding, and nonjudgmental person because of what you have been through. God uses people like us to help others, and that's a special thing. I was a psychiatric social worker for 36 years, and I was blessed every day. You are actually an extremely special human being, and although life is harder for people like us, we have an important place in this world that only we can fill. Thank you so very much; your words meant the world to me. Sincerely. Pat F.
Diane, I so feel your pain. I still struggle myself with depression, and my writing has helped me feel some relief. I am so touched and pleased that my words could help and show you that you are definitely not alone. Don't be down on yourself about your suffering becasue depression is a legitimate illness, it is not your fault. I always say to judgemental people, "Do you really think that we want to feel this way. Don't you think we would give anything to conquer this? It just makes life a greater struggle." But I also believe that our own suffering makes us more substantial and compassionate human beings and that maybe God gave us this pain so we could help others. You can feel better, Diane, at your own pace, and if anyone has a problem with that, see ya! It is their loss. Please let me know how you are doing. Thank you for appreciating my work, it means a great deal to me! Your friend, Pat
Dear Sylvia,
You beautiful words were like a poem in themselves. I could not have said it better. You are wonderful!