Sunny's Wish For Mom
The sun rose in her radiance
Above fields of green and gold.
She embraced Him with her subtle warmth
As in the morning glow, He strolled.
The sun rose in her radiance
Above fields of green and gold.
She embraced Him with her subtle warmth
As in the morning glow, He strolled.
in Aging Poems
I wake up each day
On this journey of mine,
Grabbing each moment
Of my limited time.
Miss Fleming: I was looking at a poem I wrote, SWEET THINGS FOR YOUR EAR, and I saw you left me a wonderful review. We seem to have the same outlook on life. I look back on my life a lot. I...
in Aging Poems
It could not be me he's thinking of
When he looks up at the soft moonlight.
And it can't be me that he's dreaming of
When he falls asleep at night.
Another brilliant poem - I love the way you write - keep them coming, please.
Very best wishes, Ann
in Snow Poems
We awakened to the whitest light
Seeping through the blinds.
We leapt from bed and to the windows
To take a probing peek outside.
Your poem is so beautifully written and contains such vivid images! It takes me right back to my childhood. I can almost feel the ice crystals hitting my face!
Best wishes,
Virginia
I watch the hands on the clock tick by
And I wonder where time goes.
Will this be the year to end all years?
Well, only God can know.
Excellent poem, as always. Keep writing...
Very best wishes,
Ann
Love this poem for many reasons. Its message hit home for me, and I love the positive spin you put on it because aging can be so depressing at times. I love the form of this poem; it's my favorite, and the rhythm of you words is perfect. It's so simplistic but carries a great deal of real, honest feeling. Lovely, lovely poem. Thank you!
Patricia, I'm so pleased that you took the time to read my poem and could relate to it. Your words are so very kind, and I truly appreciate it.
Mr. Ali, your words have touched me to think that you could feel the words of my poem so deeply. You are so very kind to take the time to read my poem and be so kind in your critique.
Mr. Zafur, your words are very kind, and I am so pleased that my poem touched you. I am a strong believer in God, and it is a wonderful feeling when you realize that life is that simple. Just love God and do your best to do the right thing and everything else will fall into place. I'm very thankful to you for taking the time to read my words. May God bless you as well.
Thank you so much for your support and kind words. It means so much to me that you could relate to my words. You have made me feel very good.