41. Dust To Dust
If your heart was a diamond, perfect and clear,
glittering gleaming like a broken heart's tear,
if lust was coal, dusty and black,
would it make you realize you want to come back?
If your heart was a diamond, perfect and clear,
glittering gleaming like a broken heart's tear,
if lust was coal, dusty and black,
would it make you realize you want to come back?
I really liked the metaphors and symbolism woven into this poem, as well as the artful rhyming and flow of the words. Lovely poem to read! I found it to be energetic, almost youthful, but...
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He talks about her like I'm not there,
he just doesn't care.
He holds her hand like he used to hold mine,
I was with my boyfriend for 6 months and we didn't have many relationship problems. We were always with each other and loved each other very much. Well I thought so, until one night he...
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Do you remember when we were little kids,
dancing freely in the meadow,
our hair flowing in the breeze,
Playing all day without a care in the world,
I can relate my friendship was like that, I was there for her before she knew any of the them. She didn't ditch me she did something far worse. She pretended that I belonged with them and...
Love is so complicated.
It makes me so frustrated,
But when I'm with you, everything is right,
And that is why I wish to be with you tonight.
I am 17 to me love has always been hurting. The one I truly loved I had to let him go cause I had to move to a new country. It became a bit hard for us to talk. We turned insecure and I guess...
As I let go of all of my love,
I want you to know you were a gift from above.
The light of my life
To end all my strife.
The first snow of the year falls around me.
I stare out my window. It never fails to astound me
How each flake is different. None are the same.
You're welcome. It's really sad when someone dear becomes a stranger in two minutes. It's a nice poem that was greatly expressed.
How do you heal a broken heart
When your whole world has fallen apart?
I still have hope in every new day,
Even though I love you and you walked away.
I also have suffered a broken heart, and I'm still choking on the slivered pieces. There is not a day that goes by that my eyes don't moisten like the morning dew. When my everything left, my...
When I hold his hand, I become invincible.
Nothing could ever go wrong.
When I hear his voice, it makes my day.
His voice is a beautiful song.
I’m almost 15, and about a month ago I found out my boyfriend at the time was cheating on me. He’s 16, and we were dating for about a month when I found out. I don’t think I’ve ever cried...
She loves him, he loves her not.
He refuses to give her just one shot.
She's falling apart. He has no clue.
Things would be easy if only he knew.
It's four o' clock in Finland,
And I know that you're asleep.
I know that you are dreaming, and
If you're not, you're counting sheep.
Actually I'm thinking of him!
But he hates me.
Crazy 'bout him.
Don't tell my secret!
I am like this poem. He is kinda my friend, but I'm sure he doesn't think of me as a friend. I'm pretty sure he thinks of me as a normal human. I want him to be my BFF.
I don’t care where you go from now...
I don’t care who you love or even how...
I don’t care if you’re happy...
Sure don’t care if you’re sad...
I lie awake on my bed and think of you.
Oh, how I wish you had a clue.
I think of the times we spent together.
I wish those memories would last forever.
I am lying awake in my nice, warm bed.
I am not sleeping because you are stuck in my head.
I try to forget that you were ever here,
But you made a huge impact in that one short year.
Wonderful poetry Taeha, your despair shows through every word you've shared. I hope one day your friend shows up, with a big, warm, consoling hug.
If there was one more thing I could tell you,
I'd tell you that you saved my life.
I'd tell you that you are my savior.
In the darkness you are my light.
I really love your poems. They're brilliant. Well done!
You think that I don't miss you
And you think that I don't care.
I'm tired of all this.
Time to open up and share.
I'm going through something like this right now. "My friend" is not really a friend. She treats me like I do not belong, and I do not like the way she treats me. She went behind my back and...
The truth came out
Bit by aching bit
Leaving my heart sealed together by only one stitch
And my soul turning to nothing but dust
I see the way you look at me; it starts a flutter in my heart.
I feel the sadness, confusion, and pain throughout my every vein,
Even though we're worlds apart.
He's gone,
Like a shadow when the sun goes down.
The magic fades when he turns around.
Great descriptors that paint a picture for the reader. Looking forward to read more from you!
You pass me wtihout speaking
as if I was this stranger not worth meeting.
But, nobody knows the memories we shared
nobody knows that we both cared.