Friendship Poem by Teens

Three Friends

I wrote this poem because I wanted to show the few people who truly cared, that I appreciated them. What better way to show someone that than to dedicate a poem to them? Now this poem is dedicated to 3 people, who obviously wouldn't run away when I got angry. They'd care for me when I was depressed. They'd be there for me all the time. Before I met them, I was so angry... I hated the world and just wanted to murder everything in sight.

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Really nice poem. I hope that your friends see this poem. I think they would be really glad that you wrote this poem and dedicated it to them.

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Three Saviors

Published by Family Friend Poems July 2012 with permission of the Author.

Before I met you,
I was filled with an eternal darkness, forever hating.
It was all I knew...
but alas, I lay there... waiting

For the ones who would truly care,
The ones who would actually be fair,
Who wouldn't run when my fangs would be bared.

So this is a little rhyme I came up with,
while playing in my head; a low riff.
And it's for you,
because you knew.

You knew my pain,
and you'd stand with me in the harsh rain,
even when I became insane.

So thank you, for letting me have a good start,
For letting me show you my art,
For not trying to dart,
Because you hold 1/3 of my heart.

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