Sing To Me, Autumn

• by Teresa Salcedo
• 2 years ago

"Sleep with me, Autumn, beneath your starlit skies! Let your yellow harvest moon, shimmer in 'my' eyes!"

Oooh, I can feel it and see it! I am back in full autumnal colors of the trees that I get to see on my walks with my dog!
'Oaky smoke-filled air!'
'Leaves crunching underneath my feet!'
Spectacular!

• by James W. Young
• 2 years ago

This work is rich with image and beauty. Excellent effort. To connect with autumn like you do brings the reader into a connection also.

• by HOSwrites
• 3 years ago

I love it!!! I really enjoyed the read. I like the way you turned Autumn into a being. And it truly does have so much to offer and to enjoy. I also like the flow of the poem. Top notch. Thank you.

• by Anne Pollock, Oregon Coast, USA
• 4 years ago

I love autumn, and your poem describes everyone I love about it, and so beautifully. Thank you.

• by David Hamilton
• 4 years ago

Hi Patricia. Love this poem. Beautiful language and structure. Also love its rhythmic nature.

• by Etude Renol
• 5 years ago

Beauty, creativity, and amazing word play all in one morsel! This poem shares nature and gives you the most autumny feel when you read it. Between words like "Starlit" and the repetition at the start of each stanza, this is a masterpiece. Purely exquisite. Keep writing!

• by Elis Gope
• 5 years ago

Even when you're 11, you can really feel this poem. It has life and sparkles and also captures a real life thing, autumn, with beautiful words and makes us marvel. YOU ARE A GREAT POET!

• by Janet L Bayless
• 6 years ago

The poem of the day, "Sing To Me Autumn," resonates with me. Having been born in this month, Autumn has always been my favorite part of the year. I, too, have written many poems on the subject, as well as Published a book of poetry titled "Autumn Calls" in 2015. This poem of the day is beautifully penned by Patricia.

• by Suhaani, india
• 6 years ago

It is a beautiful poem about autumn, and it has been portrayed in words beyond my reach.

• by Subhash Bansal
• 6 years ago

This poem beautifully provides us an opportunity to feel connected with nature. As human beings, we have been born in the lap of nature, have grown under the protection of nature, but we’ve gone away from nature because of materialistic reasons. This poem shows us that true happiness will be found again in the lap of nature. That’s why it has touched my heart. Thanks for the post.
-Subhash Bansal

• by Abu Zafar, Banglaesh
• 7 years ago

Yes, I am touched. The poet has nicely put up the beauty of nature. Nature is love, and love is nature. There is nothing out of nature. I appreciate the poet for the way nature and love is narrated. I like to go through more poems of this nature from the poet.

• by Wayne V Lamb, Delaware
• 8 years ago

Wow, this poem just touched me with a warm feeling. As if I were driving down a most awesome country back road cherishing a beautiful vision and a lofty idea in my heart that one day the world will come to realize that it's only due to God's creation.

• by Jo A. Sparkes
• 8 years ago

I love the autumn, too. The trees are festooned in coats of gold! Great read here, great stuff.
Jo

• by Michigan Moose
• 8 years ago

From the mind of the writer to the heart of the reader I feel is the best way that I can show my feelings in word about this poem. I could almost feel the cool breeze and smell the turning leaves as I read this poem. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I look forward to reading more of your writing.

• by Georgia Frost
• 8 years ago

I think this poem is absolutely amazing. Leaving me almost counting down the days of the year till I can once again be with my love, Autumn. Most beautifully written. Thank you so much for sharing it with me.