Valentine's Day Poem to Him

Noticed By A Crush

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I truly loved this poem. I dream of falling in love one day. There's someone I go to school with that makes me feel like I'm floating. Yes this may sound cheesy but it's true. I may be young...

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Wonderful Heartache

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Published by Family Friend Poems August 2006 with permission of the Author.

My stomach starts to ache, my hands start to shake.
As he draws nearer, one last deep breathe I take.
My heart beats fast like never before.
The butterflies tickle and tease till I can't take it anymore.
I begin to tremble as he says hello.
I can feel the blushing of my face start to show.
By looking down, I try to hide my fluster.
I reply to his greeting with a soft hello mutter.
With his face so handsome, he gives me a smile and a wink.
As he turns to walk away, my hearts begins to sink.
So sweet and so kind and he noticed ME.
I feel that he is the Prince Charming for me.
This feeling I have is more than a crush.
When I think about him, I get a sudden rush.
Great chills shrill down the back of my spine.
Why oh why, I wonder, can't he be just mine?
In my thoughts he will always shine.
I wish he were...my valentine...

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  • Ava Lennon by Ava Lennon
  • 4 years ago

I truly loved this poem. I dream of falling in love one day. There's someone I go to school with that makes me feel like I'm floating. Yes this may sound cheesy but it's true. I may be young with a long road ahead of me, but this feels true. When I'm older I want someone to come home to, someone who feels love for me like I feel for them.

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  • Destiny Denise Frazier by Destiny Denise Frazier
  • 4 years ago

I met my boyfriend 1 year and 10 months ago. We started dating 10 months ago. I hope I never lose him. I love him so much. He's in England because his dad's stationed there. I fear I'll never see him again.

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  • Frank Fisher by Frank Fisher
  • 15 years ago

As a parent of a teenage girl I understand exactly how this woman feels. Childhood was void of the complexities of life. A hug and kiss could actually make thing OK again. Now there are things they simply have to find a way to go through on their own. We can still help, and we will. But they are the one's who have to put it on their back and figure it out.

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