Hurting Poem

Poem About Feeling Like You Can't Go On

There are many people like this including myself, and I wanted those out there to see just how many people are alike and we can get through it all.

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I've fallen deeply in love with a beautiful woman who happens to be a bit younger than me. She has recently been hurt by some other guy who she has had a long run with. I want more than...

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Falling Apart

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Published by Family Friend Poems May 2008 with permission of the Author.

She wakes up every morning
to screaming and crying.
The tears are burning,
because of all the scratching.
She feels as if she is not needed anymore
and is constantly punching the door.
Her body hurts because of her broken heart,
of falling in love and then falling apart.
She wants him back,
but she thinks it won't last,
only because it seems like he doesn't want her anymore,
and now she wants to go through the floor.
You say you love her, but this is no way to prove it.
now the knife and her heart have met.
He played with her love like it was a game.
Now it'll never be the same!

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  • Richard Ortiz by Richard Ortiz
  • 8 years ago

I've fallen deeply in love with a beautiful woman who happens to be a bit younger than me. She has recently been hurt by some other guy who she has had a long run with. I want more than anything in the world to make her feel better, but I fear that I have pushed her away. In such a short time I've managed to ruin things. I can't sleep, eat or focus on life. I can only pray that I can find a way to fix things. :/

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  • Ashley by Ashley, Chicago Illinois
  • 13 years ago

this poem was great :/
my family is trouble, one minute we're fine then everyone's arguing with each other and I cant take it. it hurts my heart and I'm writing a sonnet poem about my family and I can't because its hard to describe and it hurts me to even think or write about it.

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  • Beccy Rosee by Beccy Rosee
  • 13 years ago

This poem is amazing :( I totally agree, see I suffer from depression I self harm and have been abused as a child) . But I picked myself up it wasn't easy though! Everyone said they'd stay by me side throughout this act but they broke that promise. I was forced to get better on my own and still to this day I am suicidal and lost without the past . The memories are what break me .

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