I have struggled myself and this poem is very touching and I feel that this is also how I have felt over time.
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Hi, brother John, my family friend forum friend. Loved your sweet poem. God bless you. Best wishes, John.
I really enjoyed this poem, I felt I had been on the bike ride myself. Very best wishes, Ann.
Another lovely poem, Ann. Best wishes, John Alexander.
People say me and my boyfriend are too young to love (we are in 8th grade) maybe they're right maybe we are too young but I won't break up with him when someone tells me to. I love him too much and it'd be painful for me to have to leave him. I have depression and he is the only thing that makes my life a bit brighter and easier to continue to live. Since me and him got together (October 27, 2025) I've been feeling a bit happier and better at opening up. I love my boyfriend<3
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Tell him I said, "Thank you so much for choosing my poem and bringing its message to his class." I love the fact you both enjoyed it.
Kevin
I want you to know that this poem hit hard. As someone who's been on the complete other side of this, this was so comforting to hear. It felt like all the things I wish my friend said to me. She never did. She slowly drifted away. She didn't care and she caused so much pain. I like to think maybe she feels this way but I'll never know. This poem is beautiful and I hope you know that your friend appreciates this, no matter what's happened and it means a lot more than you could ever imagine.
Beautifully written. I only wish I had your faith and belief. Very best wishes, Ann
Found this poem and read it with quite a few to my 8 year old son. He chose it out of a few and is reciting it for his class tomorrow. We both loved the clever reveal at the end and all the images of what the word can mean to someone.
Thanks so much for your comment, Ann. I'm so happy you read and enjoy them.
Warmest, James.
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