Goodbye

• by Kendra Marie Dunlap
• 3 years ago

Your poem perfectly describes the relationship with who I thought was the love of my life, but I sorely found out that he loved drinking more than me. I found out in the end he was also calling his ex behind my back. It really hurt for a long time. I still think about it sometimes, but I read your poem a lot in this. It helped me get through, and I’m happy in my marriage now with a different man with whom I now have a beautiful two-year-old daughter, so thank you.

• by Olgour
• 7 years ago

You have made me think that I was the one for you. You fooled me in that way that I could not see all the lies you were telling me and all the bad stuff you were doing behind my back. I always prayed for my relationship with you to work out. I always told myself that you will be the father of my children, but I guess I also fooled myself. I also believed you when you said "I love you." I always felt that fast heartbeat. I thought you were the one.

• by Jamie, Illinois
• 11 years ago

You're writing is amazing and really hit home. I'm at the point you described in my marriage now. It seems like one of the hardest and most lonely points in a relationship. Thank you for sharing.