She Waits
in Ocean Poems
With gentle winds aloft preceding summer storm
Through open window dusk a woman sits forlorn
Amidst the earthy briny air a gentle breeze persists
in Ocean Poems
With gentle winds aloft preceding summer storm
Through open window dusk a woman sits forlorn
Amidst the earthy briny air a gentle breeze persists
Thank you for your comment on my poem. I am so glad that you liked it and I really appreciate your review. I have read your poems and I really enjoyed them. Once again, thank you so much. Susan.
Your image faded through the years
I trace each line and furrow
Among your family there you stand
Unaware of tomorrow, tomorrow.
This is a beautifully written piece with a profound message. Best wishes, J.C.E.
in Humorous Poems
With dimming light and hours passed
They are awakened and quickly amassed
From within deep corners and underground
In multitudes of numbers they are found.
in Aging Poems
He moved with deliberate motion
Each step a painful chore
His body bent and crippled
To the depths of his human core.
Hello Ann,
Thank you again for your kind and encouraging words. I dedicated this poem to my dearest father who passed away at the age of 98. You are NOT elderly! Best wishes from across...
in Ocean Poems
Across the vastness of open sea
Traveling onward incessantly
Beginning with a breath of air
From skies above with clouds or bare;
This is a beautifully written piece with a profound message. Great job. Susan
Thank you for your comment on my poem. I am so glad that you liked it and I really appreciate your review. I have read your poems and I really enjoyed them. Once again, thank you so much. Susan.
Thank you again for reading my poems and commenting. I love the poems you have written.
We seem to have a mutual poetic connection even though we are an ocean apart. Thank you so much. Best wishes, Susan
Hello Ann,
Thank you again for your kind and encouraging words. I dedicated this poem to my dearest father who passed away at the age of 98. You are NOT elderly! Best wishes from across the way. Susan
Hello fellow Lake Erie boater. I am thankful for your note. I know my poetry is very elementary, but I always try to base it on some personal experience. The Mentor Yacht Club is so beautiful. I have been there, but I have never sailed on a Tartan 41. What a beautiful yacht. It sounds like you are quite the veteran sailor and brave to be that far off shore. We know how unpredictable Lake Erie can be, especially before the days of cell phones and instant radar. The fact that my simple poem brought you some joy on a difficult day encourages me to continue writing. Thank you for reading it and for sharing your Lake Erie adventures with me.
Susan