41. Mom
You have always been there for me,
Teaching me about life's ways
Around you
There is never a dull day.
You have always been there for me,
Teaching me about life's ways
Around you
There is never a dull day.
That poem reminded me of my mommy and I. My mommy was diagnosed with diabetes type one, and also M.S. and even though I know she tries her hardest and fails, I still love her, but sometimes I...
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Her hands held me gently from the day I took my first breath.
Her hands helped to guide me as I took my first step.
Her hands held me close when the tears would start to fall.
Her hands were quick to show me that she would take care of it all.
This poem greatly touched my heart. Because of this, I was encouraged to use my hands to do good and beneficial things instead of bad and to-the-hell things. So thank you for the author of...
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The tears, the years, the hurt, the fears,
The lies, the ties, the days, and goodbyes
And then the light shines through,
It's you.
When my grand daughter GRACE was born, the first thing I thought of was. "My Special Angel" It's been our song for 5 years. Now I find this poem. I will keep it and share with her when...
She picks me up from a fall.
She yells at me when I color on the wall.
She tells me about God and encourages me to pray.
She holds me close and tells me everything's okay.
I know it's been a hard task,
the things we ask of you.
You should know you're very special
for all the things you do.
The best mother in the world is a mother that speaks the word of truth and sees her family needs and wants. A mother's love is a love that you would never want to forget about. To my mother,...
A mother is special; she's more than a friend.
Whenever you need her, she'll give you a hand.
She'll lead you and guide you in all that you do,
Try all that she can just to see you get through.
This is a wonderful poem. It evoked a strong emotional response & made me think of my own wonderful mother. I very nearly teared up. I couldn't have written it any better. Well done.
Analysis of Form and Technique
The one who brought me down to earth
And held me every day.
The one who gracefully gave me birth
And said, I love you in every way.
Very good usage of words. Rhyming pattern is good and the structure rocks. One of the best I've read so far. Keep on writing more!
Mom, you are the centerpiece of my life.
The light in my sun.
I can't thank you enough for all you have done.
You make me smile when I am sad.
Mommy, I love you. You are the syrup to my waffles, the sunshine to the night. You are always by my side!
I have a special treasure,
A gift from up above,
A precious treasure.
It is my mother's love.
My mom raised me alone without a father, she has been there for me through thick and thin. I am 22 years old having a 3 years daughter, whom I thought my mom will throw me out of her house...